How to Write a Personal Statement

The art of crafting a personal statement is a crucial skill for a student to learn. When applying to college, university, or medical school a prospective student must learn how to write a personal statement. This statement should present themselves, their accomplishments, goals, and dreams in a way that inspires, communicates, and moves the reader.

Below, Avalon University’s Admissions Team offers some tips on how to write a personal statement.

  • Tell your story
  • Check your grammar, spelling and punctuation
  • Express your goals/motivation clearly and honestly
At Avalon University, we want your personal statement to tell your story! We love to learn about your journey, what inspired you to pursue medicine, the experiences that shaped you, and the passion that drives you toward becoming a physician. We value authenticity and the unique perspective each student brings. Let your personality shine through!
Kelly Zajac- Kelly Zajac, Admissions Specialist, Avalon University

Learning how to write a personal statement is vital to your success as a medical student. Developing this skill early can provide more opportunities as you build your medical career.

See the below example of a well written undergraduate personal statement.

“As I dissected my 17 year old self’s letter I came up with a few conclusions:

  1. Decision-makers appreciate raw honesty,
  2. They want to know some things unique to that candidate, beyond the ‘same-old, same old’ – which they read over & over again,
  3. They certainly appreciate a degree of selflessness
  4. If the candidate, upfront, relates how she/he wants to show their appreciation to the school or residency program for ‘taking a chance’ with them, that is bound to be appealing also.”

Dr. Lanny Wilson, M.D.

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